Desire To Control Her (Part: 5 Deep Trouble) Manan


Nandini’s P.O.V.

Oh, God! This Man is driving me insane. His proximity literally took my breath away from me. I’m not understanding what was it. But whatever it was, it was something very strong and foreign.

But I need to stay away from him. I know his intention, so it’s better he stays away from me.

If he wasn’t interested in the BDSM relationship, I would have thought to give him a try but never to this BDSM relationship.

I’m thinking all this, sitting in the cafe and sipping the coffee with a serious look on my face.

Eve’s P.O.V.

I’m going to meet Dev at his house and then he will take me on the date. I’m excited but a bit upset, because the dress Dev had given me to wear, I couldn’t able to wear it because at the breakfast Nanz by mistake dropped the glass of juice over that dress.

He will also become upset after seeing me not in that dress. I just hope he doesn’t freak out and cancel our date.

I stepped into his house and saw him sitting in the hall. He must be waiting for me. He raised his head and smiled at me. I smiled back, strolling to him.

His smile faded into a frown as he saw my outfit. He stood up, staring at me sternly.

“Dev, I,”

He said, cutting my words. “Why didn’t you wear what I had given you in the morning?” He asked in a dominating tone.

“Dev, Nanz dropped the juice on that dress at breakfast. I’m sorry your mood got spoiled because of me.” My eyes became moist and his eyes softened after knowing this.

He clasped my face and said, “Baby Girl, don’t be sorry. It wasn’t your fault.”

“You aren’t angry?” I asked to confirm.

“I was when I didn’t know the reason but not anymore because it wasn’t your fault.” He explained to me and a smile flashed on my face.

“But you could have worn that spoiled dress for your master and could have changed here as I was dying to see you in that dress. I specially went to my friend’s store and selected that dress for you.” After listening to him, I again became sad.

“I’m sorry.” I moved my eyelashes down guiltily.

“It’s fine. But be careful from next time.” He kissed my forehead.

“And tonight you’re staying with me because I’ll punish you for not following my order.” As he uttered, smirking, my eyes widened in shock.

“That’s not fair, Dev. You only said that it wasn’t my fault.” I complained.

“But still you didn’t follow my order. Doesn’t my little submissive deserve punishment for this?” He grinned.

“Yes, Master.” I nodded meekly at him.

“Now let’s go on date, baby girl.” He held out his hand to me. I smiled, placing my hand on his hand.

Then he led me out of the house. I’m so excited about our date.

Manik’s P.O.V.

I stepped into my house and my sister, Kaira bumped into me. She is dressed up for the party. My sister is so beautiful, sweet and kind-hearted women and I love her a lot. She is like my Doll.

“Going somewhere, Doll?” I asked her.

“I’m going to a party and staying at my friend’s house tonight.” She told me, looking at the watch.

“I think, you’re getting late. So go and enjoy, but don’t drink too much.”

She smiled and nodded at me before running out.

I came to my room and sent the message to my friends on the WhatsApp group. Without having a submissive, life is so boring, seriously.

Me: Anybody up to hang out tonight?

Dev: No, Bro. Busy with my Love, she is staying at my home tonight.

Dev replied instantly.

Max: I’m not in a mood.

Me: What happened to our party Boy?

Dev: Is everything alright, Max?

Max: I broke up with Lara.

Stefan: What? Why?

Alex: It’s shocking. Are you serious?

Dev: What happened, Max? Why suddenly break up?

I’m also shocked after knowing this. By the way last night the way Max had punished Lara in front of us, was also shocking as he never did this. He never punished Lara openly.

Max: I just don’t want to talk about this right now. Guys, I’ll talk later.

Manik: Okay, take care.

Dev: Dude if you want to talk to us, you can call us anytime.

Alex: Max, I can understand your pain, I have gone through this. You will be fine.

Stefan: Bro, take care. When you get fine, we want the breakup party.

I instantly replied.

Manik: Dude, can’t you see Max is not fine.

Seriously, I don’t like Stefan. I don’t know what the hell he’s doing in our group. He doesn’t understand anybody’s emotions.

Dev: Stefan, are you crazy, it’s not the time to joke.

Alex: 🤫😡

Stefan: Chill, Guys. Lara was just his submissive, not his wife.

Manik: Stefan, will you please just shut up.

Alex: But he had feelings for her.

Dev: Yes, Alex is right.

Max: No, she was just my submissive and I had no feelings for her.

Max is looking angry. What could have happened between them? I wondered.

Dev: We’ll meet and talk, Max when you feel better.

The conversation ended here.

I called Dev and Alex on WhatsApp to talk about Max.

Alex and Dev answered the call together, “hello.”

“Do you guys know what happened between Lara and Max that they broke up?” I asked.

“No, Dude, I’m so shocked.” Alex replied.

“I was shocked last too, the way Max was treating Lara.” Dev said.

“Yes, I was also doubting that something is wrong between them.” I said.

“I’m worried for Max, Guys.” Alex said anxiously.

“Alex, relax. We’ll find out everything and try to make them meet again if possible.” I said as I can’t see my friend suffering.

“You’re right, Manik.” Dev said.

I suddenly turned around as I felt like I heard Kaira’s voice. I shook my head, ignoring it.

“So Dev, now bye. You enjoy with your love.” I said.

“Yeah, You both continue, bye.” Dev disconnected the call.

Alex and I talked for some time, then he hang up, saying he has important work.

If Eve is staying with Dev, then Nandini must be alone at her home.

“I think I should visit my soon to be submissive.” I murmured and smiled mischievously.

Nandini’s P.O.V.

Today also I’m alone at home. Eve called me up and informed me that she is staying with Dev. Sometimes I hate Dev for snatching my friend from me.

Now I’m in a loose top and shorts. I’m getting so bored. I’m just scrolling down Instagram reels.

Then I heard the doorbell and my eyes twinkled.

“I think God has sent someone for my entertainment.” I squealed before running out of the room.

I excitedly opened the door and my eyes widened in shock, seeing the person.

What the hell he is doing at my home?

“Why are you staring at me like you have seen a ghost?” He asked, folding his arms across his broad chest and I rolled my eyes.

“You aren’t less than a ghost.” As I said, he raised his brows in shock. “You’re clinging to me like a ghost cling to somebody. Wherever I go, you follow me like a Ghost. No, no, Ghost will be better than you. You’re worst than a ghost.” I started blabbering.

“Will you please shut up?” He shouted, getting frustrated.

“No, I will speak. It’s my house, I can speak how much I want. Who the hell are you to,” he shushed me by placing his finger over my lips and pulling me closer to him by grasping my waist with his other hand.

I got lost in his black bewitching and intoxicating eyes. He is hypnotising me with his eyes and our proximity is taking my breath away from me. Why the hell his closeness is affecting me so much?

He moved closer to my ear by blowing his warm breath on my cheek and sending chills down my spine.

“Won’t you invite your guest inside, Butterfly?” He asked in a husky voice and his breath stroked my neck.

Oh, God! Oh, God! I literally felt a strong sensation between my legs when his lips touched my neck. He just lightly caressed his lips down my neck softly before moving away from me.

I don’t know why but I felt irritated when he moved away.

I want him to stay close to me and kiss me there and every inch of my body.

No, No, what I’m thinking? Why will I want this?

Shit! I’m in deep trouble as a dom’s touch and proximity are affecting me so much.

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