Love Or Sin (Part : 29 Fun In The Rain)


Inspector Raichand showed the photo of Rahul to Nandini and asked, “he is Rahul Khanna, do you know him?” They were sitting in the hall. Manik had gone to attend the important call from the office. Nandini was staring at the photo and trying to recognise him.

“I don’t know him.” She shook her head, looking at the inspector.

“One second..” Manik came there and snatched the photo from Inspector’s hand. His eyes popped up after seeing the photo of Rahul. Nandini and Mr Raichand were looking at him confusingly.

“What happened, Manik?” Nandini got up and asked after putting her hand on Manik’s shoulder. Manik first looked at Nandini and then moved his eyes to Mr Raichand.

“Do you know him, Mr Malhotra?” As Mr Raichand asked from Manik, he nodded his head.

“Who is he, Manik?” Nandini asked, staring at the photo of Rahul in anger. Then he told Nandini and Mr Raichand, how he had beaten Rahul that day because he was going to touch Nandini.

“I am sorry, Nandini because of me, you-you suffered so much. I am sorry.” He apologised from Nandini, having tears in his eyes. He was feeling guilty because now he was blaming himself for whatever happened with Nandini that night. Nandini was nodding his head constantly.

Inspector Raichand got up from the Sofa. “I think, I should leave now. I will try my best to find this Rahul Khanna as soon as possible.” Manik wiped his tears with his palm and shook his hand with him.

“I am sorry Nan..” Manik again apologised from Nandini, having guilt in his eyes as Inspector left.

“It wasn’t your fault, Manik.” She cut his words and cupped his face.

“No, Nandini. It was my fault.” He spoke, removing her hands from his face. Nandini was taken aback after seeing the way he was behaving.

“I will never able to forgive myself for this.” He turned around and stood facing his back to her. Few tears trickled down his cheeks. He was regretting badly because she had suffered a lot.

“Manik, please stop blaming yourself. Everything was written in our destiny. It wasn’t your fault. That bastard will be punished. It was his fault, not yours.” She hugged him from behind and tried her best to make him understand that it wasn’t his fault. Manik squeezed his eyes shut and few more tears roll down his cheeks.

“I really love you, Nandini.” He held her one hand and kissed her knuckles. Then he turned toward her after removing her hands from his body.

“I can’t see you in pain but because of my anger, you suffered a lot. That person took revenge of my anger from you. I..” he was crying in the guilt and blaming himself.

“Shut up, Manik. Why are you not understanding such a simple thing ?” Nandini shouted and cut his words. She couldn’t see him blaming himself like this anymore.

She cupped his face and explained, “It was god’s plan, Manik. Look, I am fine now and we are together. Look at the positive side. You know, whatever happens, it happens for god.”

“You are right. It was the plan of our destiny to make us meet and to make me realise that you are my life and your happiness matters the most to me.” As he finally understood, a smile touched her lips.

“I love you so much, Manik. Never blame yourself like this again.” She warned him and kissed his forehead after standing on her toes. He closed his eyes in response. Then she kissed his eyelids and took away all his tears with her kisses. He was now smiling brightly, gazing at her.

“I love you more, my star.” He took her in his arms and kissed her hair. He hugged her tightly and she was snuggling in his arms which was her favourite place. His soothing heartbeat was giving peace to her soul.

At night after the dinner, Manan were lying in each other arms and they were talking on random topics. Suddenly it started raining outside.

“Wow, it’s raining.” Nandini squealed like an excited kid as the voice of rain reached in her ears. She loved the rain a lot.

“Let’s go..” she sat up on the bed and said holding his hand.

“Nandini, you are not well. You still have fever. You will not go outside in rain.” He denied strictly and concernedly. She made a sad pout.

“Manik, stop behaving like a mother. Please, I really want to dance in the rain. Come na, please..” She tried to convince him, looking at him with her pleading eyes.

“No means no..” but he wasn’t ready let her go in the rain.

“But I am going.” She got up from the bed holding the pillow and ran outside while laughing after throwing the pillow over him.

He got up, calling her. “Nandini…”

She reached the swimming pool area which was attached to his room. She closed her eyes and stood in the rain by opening her arms. She was feeling like her pain was going away with every drop of rain which was falling on the floor passing through her body.

Manik was gazing at her through the wall which was made of glass. He got completely lost in her. He was loving the way how rain droplets were drenching her completely. She was looking so beautiful. Like always, she was shining like a star in the darkness. He was falling in love with her more. This girl had been making him crazy since day one. She was doing magic on him.

Nandini looked at him after opening her eyes and strolled to him. Manik was standing, keeping his one hand on the glass wall. Nandini put her one hand on the wall exactly at the same place. They were gazing at each other, having so much love in their eyes like they were kissing each other soul through their eyes.

They put their other hand on the wall in the same way. They moved closer to each other to kiss each other lips forgetting that there was a glass wall in between them. They kissed on the glass after closing their eyes and in their mind, they felt like they were kissing each other lips. They pulled away and smiled looking at each other.

“Now come with me.” She came into the room and led him out by holding his hand. Manik didn’t stop her because he was so lost in his star which was shining the most among all of the stars which were in the sky. His heart was so happy and his soul was at peace after seeing her like this.

He was drenching in rain and still gazing at Nandini fondly without even blinking his eyes. Nandini blushed looking at him.

“I know, I am beautiful and you have a whole life to look at me like this. But for now, dance with me.” She spoke holding his both hand. Manik chuckled and nodded his head.

She was dancing crazily moving her hands in the air. Manik was laughing looking at her. As she heard his laugh, she looked at him.

“Stop laughing at me and dance. Believe me, you will enjoy it a lot.”

“Okay fine.” As He agreed, she grinned.

“You just have to copy my steps.” She instructed him and danced again crazily. Manik danced in the same way as she was dancing. They were jumping holding each other hands and singing the songs loudly. They both were looking like small kids who are carefree. They were dancing in the rain freely forgetting about all the problems, all the sorrows and pain. It was the best time of their life. They were together and happy, and what else they wanted?

There was a thunderstorm. Nandini jumped over Manik and hugged him tightly, getting scared. Manik was taken aback, but within few seconds only he held her tightly in his arms. They got lost in each other arms, forgetting about the whole world. They were getting so much peace in each other arms.

After a few minutes, they broke the hug. Manik was setting her hair carefully which were falling on her face and blocking the view of her beautiful face. She was looking at him, having so much love her eyes.

“Thank you for making this night so special and beautiful. I enjoyed a lot. It was so much fun.” Manik spoke excitedly after cupping her face and Nandini passed him a beautiful smile.

“I really love you, Manik. Thank you for bringing back the old me. I am so happy to get myself back.” She held his hand and kissed his palm after closing her eyes. He was smiling at her.

“I love you more, Nandini.” He also confessed and gently kissed her forehead. She felt so good to feel the touch of his lips. His forehead kisses were pure bliss for her.

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29 thoughts on “Love Or Sin (Part : 29 Fun In The Rain)

  1. Awwww so cute so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Loved their moments 😍😍😍😍😍
    Manan are loveeee♥️♥️😘😘😘🤧🤧 you described it so beautifully ❤️❤️ Love yiuu you bro♥️♥️

  2. Thank you for the update.. ❤❤❤

    Omg just………..WOW………. You implemented every single emotion every time in every chapters u wrote n now this one very well written…. Thank you for the every line u wrote an the feelings of all loved the way Manik care for Nandini.. Manik is the smarty pants as always 😍😍😍

    This chapter was filled with so much emotions that I am bliss while I reading it.. I always read the previous chapter whenever you publish a new one,,Just get the flow of the story back into my memory which is what I have done here again.. You are writing about the dynamics of Manik=Nandini= Shivansh so beautifully, I am in awe..

    I am slowly getting a feel of Manan and it is such a mixed bag of emotions.. 😍😍❤❤❤

    Most of the times till now I tend feel sorry for nandini, hardships that she goes through.. But this time my heart goes out to Manik… Every situation he tries to be right in every way even when he is hurting the most… He has suffered so much.. Nandini se love ka realized ke baad manik ne bhut suffered kiya hai.. I know u hurt her alot.. But ye blaim karna kab band karoge..

    I liked how nandini was worried for him.. She was truly his loving nandini.. She was more worried about his blaming herself.. I can’t see you like this manik.. That part made me cry.. And loved how u portayed how important nandini is for him..

    Yesss I agreed wid nandini Ye god ka n hamari writer ka plan tha 😂 nandini ki destiny me itna suffer karna tha.. Iss bad incidents se manik n nandini dono ko apni strong feeling realize ho gyi.. Nd please stop blaming yourself manik..Destiny ne Manik n nandini ko ek dusre ke liye hi banaya hai.. I am loving it.. Manik n nandini’s understanding and trust for each other
    has formed so beautiful relationship 😍😍😍
    Their unconditional love ❤😘🤗

    A update of love or sin is so precious.. When it comes no one knows.. But when it comes it swipe our feets off coz Manan is powerful, Powerpact, a pile of emotions, an emotional rollercoaster, A delivery of brilliance, a brilliance of love… Manan is an Emotion, a forced that cannot be explained…..
    The way nandini soothed him, kissing his forhead, whole moment was pure bliss..
    This whole scene is so pure n love 😭😭😭😍😍

    Manan they are in their own world forget everything.. I loved and adore beautiful couple.. Wow rain 😍😍 I loved kiddo nandini, I loved their sweet talks n sweet nok jhok.. I can feel the moment,i can feel nandini nd her pain.. Manik ko nandini se kab pyar nai hai tell me manik 🙈😍😍 Nandini ki ek ek ada par manik full on fida hai 😄😄😋😋

    I loved it rain scene.. The way u portayed glass wall scene so much pure and filled with so much love.. Literally realized nai hua ki vo glass ko kiss kar rhe ya real me 😍😍🙈🙈 Manik is totally in lost her..
    Aww both are such a cute n adorable couple 😍🙈 The way nandini demanding dance with him, such a cute scene.. Loved it.. Why is he so cute? I loved the way you portrayed Manik personality..loved this about you..loved this whole upadte..manik n nandini looking like carefree kids..God bless them 🙂

    Beautiful so beautiful both are looking like real wife n husband.. Koi na koi na ye dream bhi poora ho jaana hai.. How happy you make me, I can’t explain.. I was touched with the way this chapter has been written..

    Yess I am so happy for both of them.. I am glad ki old nandini is back.. 😍😍 I am very happy and there is one big smile on my face due to the last confession n last scene that I can’t really erase even if I try 😍😍🙈🙈

    I love and adore manik and nandini both.. I loved the way the chapter ended.. 😍😍 I can see how invested you are in this story.. Your love can be seen in this story itself.. It reaches me.. I am glad chapter ended a good way 😋😋🤗🤗

    I love u more for portraying both of them so well..

    Loads of love ❤😘

    Gudiya 💋

  3. Amazing dear… Thanks for the regular updates … Keep posting it dear…. Loving the story❤😍

  4. Amazing mind blowing seriously hamare yahan par bhi mousam rain wala hi hain but Pani baras hi nahi raha hain but seriously yahan to pyaar ki bearish kuch jyada hi ho rahi hain hayyyyyyy after so long I see him smile sorry laughing like this I am so happy for manan seriously it was bless

  5. Once again awesome update …
    Manan they are in their world forgetting everything.there love was pure .i loved the way u described the glass wall scene …
    U are the best di ..and yessss eager to read shivansh pov …but seeing manan happy it also reminds me the way wont be easy for them but they will together to reach the destination ….lots of love di .take care

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