Love Or Sin (Part : 24 Under The Shower)


Manik was staring at Nandini who had been sleeping in his arms from two hours. He was sitting behind her and she was sleeping in between his leg resting her head on his chest. His one hand was wrapped around her chest and other was entwined with her hand which he was kissing after every few minutes.

Suddenly she woke up and hugged him tightly, digging her face in his chest and wrapping her arms around his neck. She was shivering again because of fear. Manik pursed his lips to control his emotions and embraced her in his arms.

“Did you see a bad dream again ?” He asked after composing himself rubbing her back.

“It-it was so-so scary.” She replied, hugging him tighter.

“I am with you, Nandini.”He was constantly kissing her head and rubbing her back. She felt better in his arms like always. As she stopped shivering, he sighed.

She broke the hug after a few minutes. “Feeling better?” He asked, cupping her face and looking deeply into her eyes.

“Yes.” She replied, gazing into his eyes.

“Now you get fresh. Then we will have lunch and I don’t want to listen no because we have already skipped breakfast.” He kissed her forehead and said strictly. She just nodded her head meekly. Manik heart was breaking from inside seeing her pale face and her eyes which were filled with pain and fear. But still, he was trying to be strong for his star.

“Manik, I am scared. I can’t go to the bathroom alone.” She suddenly spoke.

“Nandini, I am outside only. I am not going anywhere and don’t lock the door, I will come inside immediately if you get scared, Promise.” He gulped down the lumps in his throat and spoke stroking her face.

She slightly nodded her head before getting up from the bed. Manik also stood up. She glanced at him and walked to the washroom, facing her back to him. She turned her face to look at him again. He gave her a small smile and blinked his eyes. She went to the washroom.

As she closed the door, few tears rolled down from his eyes. He couldn’t see her like this, so broken, so scared and so weak. She was never like this before, she was strong. Her condition was breaking his heart more and more. But he was ready to do anything to take her of the pain.

On the other hand, Nandini was standing naked under the shower like a lifeless soul. She was staring straight without blinking her eyes. Last night incident was revolving in her mind.

Manik had been anxiously roaming across his room from fifteen minutes which were like fifteen hours. He thought to check her.

“Nandini…” He called her two three times knocking the door but didn’t get any response from her. He became more worried.

“Nandini, are you alright? Say something.” He started crying. Next moment he just opened the door without thinking anything. She was standing, facing her back to him and water was falling down her naked body. Manik looked at her and after composing himself he strolled to her.

“Nandini,”’ he called her by putting his hand on her shoulder, she flinched as his hand touched her body.

Then she turned immediately and hugged him, burying her face in the chest and gripping his t-shirt. Manik was taken aback. He slowly wrapped his hand around her naked body. She shivered as his hand touched her body and she pushed herself into him more like she wanted him to store her in his arms forever. He also hugged her more tightly. She was getting relief in his arms. He was kissing her shoulder softly, but stopped as she spoke.

“Manik, I think-I think I am going crazy. I am losing my mind. I think I will never able to forget that incident. I will remain like this, scared and weak. I don’t want to be like this, Manik. I want myself back. It is hurting a lot. I forget who I was? My mind is only thinking about the last night. Manik, I think I lost myself forever. I am feeling nothing except the pain and fear, I’m just scared. That incident is haunting me, Manik. They almost raped me. They could have raped me completely. They crushed my soul. I am scared, Manik. I am scared. When this pain will go Manik? When?” She again cried loudly in agony, resting her head on his chest. He was trying hard to control his emotions after listening to her words and howls, but it was getting difficult for him.

“I have to be strong for my star. I can’t let her break down in front of my eyes a bit by bit. I will make my star shine again.” Manik’s heart was aching painfully and he was crying, seeing his condition.

“Nandini, look into my eyes.” He broke the hug and asked her to look into his eyes by cupping her face. She looked into his eyes after listening to him. They both were crying and their tears were getting mix with the water.

“Trust me, Nandini, I won’t let anybody harm you again. I am sorry that I couldn’t protect you at that time. But I promise you, Nandini, I will bring happiness in your life back and always protect you like a shield. You know it’s hurting here to see you in this condition.” He placed her hand over his heart.

“And my heart will only get relief when I bring a smile on your face and after I get it, I will keep it safe and never let it go away from your face. That’s my promise to you, Nandini. You are not alone in this. I am with you. Your every pain and sorrow is mine. You are not alone, Nandini. I am with you. I know you will fight back from your fear because you’re strong, Nandini. You are not weak, Nandini, you are strong.” He was trying to encourage her to fight back from her fear and also assuring her that he would heal her.

“Just surrender yourself to me and you will be fine.” He spoke last few words after resting his head over her. Both closed their eyes and got lost in each other. Nandini was feeling better now. She was saying herself in her mind, “I am strong and I will fight.” His words encouraged her. Manik was just praying to god to make his star shine again.

“I love you, Manik.” She confessed, hugging him again.

Manik hugged her back thinking “Just wait for a few hours more. I will tell you how much I love from the day I have seen you. I will make your this night so special that you will only remember this night and forget all your pain. You will just smile by remembering our beautiful night.”

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38 thoughts on “Love Or Sin (Part : 24 Under The Shower)

  1. Wowww manik is really a gentleman ❤️😍
    His eyes for once didn’t leave her face. The way he is assuring her is ❤️❤️ ….

  2. Manik is gem 💎.. He’s no lust for nandini.. 💖💖 Salute to this type of men!! 💗💗💗
    Superb update… 💕 💕 Loved it.. 👏👏

  3. Ooo ooo ooo.. 🤦‍♀️Fully naked!! 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️😱😱 Manik to gaya.. 🤦‍♀️😂😂😂😂

  4. She was in so pain that she didnt feel anything😭😭 its hurting to see her like this
    She didnt once think she is naked infront of him😫😥

    They are together to overcome this phase😢 they didnt even think about shivansh 🙂
    Shivansh deserve someone better who love him back☺☺

    Manik Will Definitely bring her back her smile n Jolly Nandu😚

    All In All The Whole Part Was damn fabulous😘💖

    Under The Shower🙈🙈🙈
    MaNan 😘💃

    Thank U Mehak Was Amazing Update 😘
    I Love You🌍😘

  5. Oh Sweetu…….

    This was one Fab chapter of this book, It was like a blast of Emotions…

    There have been so many coincidences correction, fateful happening in MaNan’s life since start that gives a goosebumps feel to their meetings..

    It was good to see a cautious Manik.. It made me travel down the memory lane when he had accidentally hurt her…

    Manik n nandini never fail to make my Day Sweetu…. 😃😃😃

    “Love Or Sin” Is an Enchanted story.. It keeps u glued and no matter how much u want to stop reading and do other works you can’t… I am proud to be your reader and as I salute u for your all stories n this chapter.. ❤❤❤❤

    Lovely!!!! Finally all the efforts have paid off… Brilliant part as usual.. Keep up the good work 😉

    Oh my God… I didn’t really expect them to early meet n ab koi inke beech na aaye but ye possible nai hai abhi bhut sari problems aani hai… That’s all I can say.. Just Amazing Sweetu ❤❤

    What an Emotional n Healing update, it was worth the wait.. So I will start from the beginning, though manik was healing nandini about the last bad incident, I loved it that he care for her, I loved it that he wants a forever wid her.. Can anyone be cuter and honest than Manik, I don’t know..
    Poor nandini.. She was in so much pain n afraid.. Like easily nandini ko bad incidents se relief nai mil rahi.. Manik is showing that He is so much strong to assure her but he is breaking by seeing like this.. Bit by bit manik Pagal ho rha hai nandini ko aise conditions me dekh kar…

    The way manik was healing her, mujhe or pyar ho rha manik se 🙈🙈 nd this way was so amazing nd I toh know that he will heal her surely n too fast.. But poor nandini was so much scared and Manik will have to effort so much on Nandini, To bring her to normal.. I can’t see u like this manik don’t cry and be patience.. ☺☺

    On the other hand Nandini was in so much pain n usse kuch pta bhi nai chal rha.. Nd manik usse iss conditions me dekh kar restless hai.. 😣😣
    Nandini didn’t once think ki vo naked hai in front of manik.. Nandini itne pain me hai usse realize nai hai…

    It’s very Emotional.. Manik reaction was so touching.. Should I cry 😣😣 This part was just as heartbreakingly emotional..
    That was emotional but beautiful part the way manik hold her I loved this scene…

    The emotions between Manik and nandini are beautifully portaryed.. The way manik console her with his soothing words I toh very loving it….
    Now it’s time for nandini to understand him..
    And I really adored this connection between them.. ❤❤❤

    Trust him nandini.. If he is saying that vo tmhe like a shield protect karega n Promise bhi kar rha toh then he surely means it… Really this guy never ceases to amaze me by his ways of making nandini understand… What can i say about the scene of Manik n Nandini consoling n promise scene.. loved it like hell 😍😍❤❤

    I loved it when manik says vo nandini ke sare pain n dard Dur karega.. Nd vo nandini ko inn sab pain, Biggest fear se jaldi hi relief dega.. It brought tears In my eyes at the end ❤❤❤

    These two are ‘Superrrr se Opeerr’ in everything..

    ‘She’ Nandini ‘SHE’…. That’s how high regards he has for ‘Her’… Regard it with Respect 😌😌😌

    Finally Finally the moment is here.. Yes yes yes.. I am still worried nandini condition though but Manik hai na 😉😉
    But it is making me yearn for next update more..
    I can’t stop falling in love with the story over n over again.. 😍😍

    You Are MINDBLOWINGLY AMAZING.. Period.. The entire chapter was so emotional and sweet, MaNan has to be my fictional couple of all the time.. 😍😘

    Finally the wait is over!!! I am very happy and there is one big smile on my face due to the last line that I can’t really erase even if try!!!! ❤😍😍

    Lovely part.. I liked how Manan spend their time together n console each other.. Bathroom part nd everything was so beautiful.. ❤❤

    Shikhu ka shower romance sabko shower me lekar jaati hai vo 😍😂😂

    Like nothing I really like mean nothing can beat the charm of your story… And about your writing sweetu it’s so so so beautiful that I can imagine the scenes while reading.!!!!!!

    Over all I loved everything about the chapter.. But bit happy nd bit sad wid the chapter.. Seriously loved this chapter bcoz of the end !!!!! Finally manik apni feeling confess karega.. I thought kya we all know very well because of shivansh maybe their relationship will face a new trial, but right now she already loves him deeply n madly
    And I am so happy to know that…

    I hope in future they will be happily married 😍😍 but so happy with the chapter.. 😍❤❤
    Needless to say.. U have simply excellent at this 👏😍 I want more 😌😍❤

    Love u loads Sweetu.. 😍😍😘😘

    Gudiya 💋💋

    1. Oh… baby… love you alot… your comment like always brought a huge smile on my face 😊😊😊😊😊😊. Your comment is the best meri gudiya. Love you alot😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  6. Aww this is amazing! 🙈

    Under the shower ❤💯

    Well I’m excited to read further mehku😜

    I love you! ❤

  7. What should I do 🤔 Should I Cry 😭😭 Or Should I be Happy ☺ M hell confused right now plz somebody help me ..

    You know Di that’s what happens everytime with me after reading your updates you made me happy and sad both in the same update and that itself tells how brilliant you are that you can make someone cry too not a small thing only few can do this and when it comes to me than Its Very Very Rare that I Cry and today I Cried 😭 for Nandini though I knew it that it’s all fictional but still it was portrayed so realistically dammm 👌👌👌👌💯💯 No words for you seriously.. You are Out of My World..💝💝😘😘😘

    And the update as I said was Fabulous 💕 Poor Nandini (well I always write these two words poor Nandini 😀😀) She is in so much pain just out of her sense and whatever she was saying in washroom Naa that made me cry 😄😄 literally…

    Thanks God that Manik is with her otherwise what would have Happen with that naive soul, she could have been in depression but that’s the another thing.. Manik is with her that’s the happiest thing 😘😘😘😘..

    I so love that part where Manik Consoled her with his words and those words literally took my heart away he is so so so lovely 💝💝❤💓💓..

    And I just can’t wait more for his confession Of his love 😍😍 I just m hoping that it happens smoothly…

    All in all the whole part was just damm Fabulous..❤❤💯💯💯

    You got all my respect and love di 😘😘
    Love you Loads 😘😘😘

    Will be waiting for the next update eagerly…


  8. The way was so amazing I know that he will heal her but I am worried about something else maybe I don’t know why but mujhe dar lag raha hain ki kahin kuch galat naa ho jaye

  9. Love the update i can feel the pain which they both are going from one lost lost her soul and another is diei

  10. This is amazing 😍
    love and care ❤
    Manik will definitely bring her back to normal…she will be strong nandini again
    Awaiting for further update🤗

  11. Nice update.hope so he will recover her soon with his love and care..and confess his love without any tragedy

  12. It’s really awesome… Loving it…. Loving manan so much… U are amazing in explaining the feelings… 😍😍….

  13. Nice update di..

    She was in so much pain that she didnt feel anything .she didnt once think she is naked infront of him .thats the depth of her pain.

    He is showing that he is strong to just assure her but he is also breaking by seeing like this ..

    Atlast they are there together to overcome this phase .they didnt even think about shivansh .

    U portrayed everything nicely .
    Lots of love
    Take care

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