Love Or Sin (Part : 11 Guilt)


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“How-how are you feeling, Manik ?” Nandini asked finally looking at Manik who was already staring at her beautiful face. He was completely lost in looking at her. Her eyes which became red, they were vividly telling him that she had cried a lot for him. Her words brought him on the earth back.

“I am fine.” As he replied, she gave him a faint smile.

“You are the reason that I am feeling better, Nandini. You touched my soul with those kisses. You healed my every wound with those kisses. I am feeling better.” He wondered, gazing at her. These were the words which he wanted to say to her at that moment but he couldn’t. Through his eyes, he was thanking her for making him fine.

She was avoiding eye contact with him because she didn’t want to get lost in his eyes. She was afraid of what would happen if he saw love in her eyes. Therefore, she was looking around, playing with her fingers.

Manik was noticing her every move, the moment of her eyes and hands. He could vividly see that she was trying to control herself from looking at him. He very well knew about this because he used to do the same thing many times.

“You can go now.” The nurse spoke walking into the ICU, catching their attention. They both looked at her. Nandini stood up from the stool and gave a slight nod to her. He felt a sharp pain in his heart. He wanted her to stay with him. He was feeling better in her presence.

Nandini glanced at Manik for the last time and gave him faint smile. Manik also smiled back faintly in response.

“Take care, Manik.” She strolled toward the door. His heart was aching watching her going away from him. He wanted to hold her hand and wanted to ask her to don’t go. Even she also wanted to stay with him.

But the situation wasn’t letting them stay with each other.

After a few hours, Manik was shifted to the private wardroom where anybody could meet him. The doctor told them that he would be discharged within few days. He needed somebody to be with him for twenty-four hours because he couldn’t even move for a few days. His one leg and one arm was fractured.

“I think you both should go the home and take some sleep. Mukti and me, we both will stay here tonight.”Cabir asked Shivansh and Nandini to go back home. They all were sitting outside of the wardroom and Mukti was inside with Manik.

“No, I will stay with Manik tonight. Aren’t you seeing his condition? He can’t even move. How can I go home and sleep comfortably?” Shivansh freaked out making Cabir quiet. Nandini put her hand on his shoulder to calm him down. Shivansh gave helpless looks to her and she blinked her eyes in assurance.

“Cabir, you and Mukti go home tonight. I will stay here with Shivansh.” Nandini spoke looking at Cabir.

“Nandini, you should go home. You must be tired. You are here since morning.” Shivansh asked Nandini to go home. How could she tell him that she didn’t want to go home, she wanted to stay with him and take care of him.

“But,” she paused for a moment to think for a reason.

“I want to stay here with you, Shivansh. Please,” She requested because she really wanted to stay here with Manik.

Shivansh didn’t force her, he just nodded his head. “Okay.” Nandini sighed.

Shivansh got up and went inside the room after leaving Nandini and Cabir.

“Your husband is so stubborn, Nandini.” Cabir spoke looking at Nandini. Nandini just gave him a faint smile.


Nandini stepped into the room and the scene in front of her eyes brought a broad smile on her face.

Shivansh was forcing Manik to take medicine, but Manik was showing tantrums like a two-year-old baby. He was denying to take them and making adorable faces. Nandini was falling in love with him more seeing his cuteness.

“Manik, why are you behaving like a small kid. Just open your mouth and take these medicines.” Shivansh shouted on him like a mother. Manik made a adorable pout.

“Shivansh, you know that I hate to eat medicine. My mouth becomes sour whenever I take them.”Manik spoke cutely and Shivansh frowned.

Nandini laughed mechanically after seeing them behaving like mother and son. She caught both of their attention with this. Now they both were gazing at her. They were completely lost in her laugh. Manik was getting so much peace, seeing her laughing so freely. He was gazing at her without even blinking his eyes. His heart and soul was finally at peace seeing her happy. He always wanted to see her happy like this.

“You both are seriously so funny. One is behaving like kid and the other one like his mother.” She walked toward them and spoke, still laughing. Shivansh smiled while Manik came on the earth back after listening to her words. He looked here and there.

“What I should do, Nandini? Manik is showing tantrums like a small kid. So I have to become his mother.” Shivansh spoke looking at Nandini and at last, he glared at Manik on which Manik made faces.

She took a deep breath after laughing and then uttered, patting his back. “Well keep it up, Mr Mother Oberoi.”

“But now I am tired of facing tantrum of my stubborn son. I think now you should try.” Shivansh said giving her the packet of medicine.

“I,” she paused, not understanding what she should say. It wasn’t easy for her to talk with Manik now because it became more difficult for her to hide her feeling in front of him after realising that she loved him.

“Yes, you.” Shivansh said and strode to the sofa which was kept in his room and sat there comfortably, sighing heavily. Nandini was standing there staring at the medicine which she was holding in her hand. Manik was wondering that how he would deny her.

Nandini took a deep breath and turned toward Manik to face him. As she looked at him, he moved his eyes down.

“Manik,” she called him after gathering courage. He instantly looked at her as she called his name.

“Please, take medicine,” she requested him in her pleasant voice and held out the medicine in front of him and her eyes were looking at medicine. Manik understood that she was again trying to avoid eye contact with him.

She paused for a moment and then continued, “or-or else how will you get recover? Everyone wants to see you fine. Don’t you want to get fine? Off course you want to get recover then take this.” While speaking, she was glancing at him and at the medicine.

As Manik immediately snatched the medicine from her hand, she raised her brows in shock. He did this because he could see that it was getting difficult for her to talk to him and he didn’t want to increase her problem.

“Water.” He whispered looking at her. She nodded her head and filled the glass with water from the jar which was kept on the side table. She was about to give him the glass when she noticed that he wasn’t able to take out medicine from the packet because his right arm was fractured.

She put the glass back on the table and took the packet of medicine from his hand. She gave him one tablet after taking out of the packet. He opened his mouth and put on his tongue. She picked up the glass from the table and gave him. In this, as their hand got touched with each other, a shiver ran down their spine. Nandini instantly withdrew her hand, moving her eyes down. He drank the water and swallowed down the tablet. She took the glass from him, smiling faintly.

“Nandini, from today it is your duty to give him medicine.” Shivansh spoke merrily looking at them. Nandini turned toward Shivansh, facing her back to Manik after putting the glass on the table.

“Now it’s time to sleep, Manik.” Shivansh got up and spoke, strolling to him. He picked up the small remote from the table and pressed the button. The upper part of Manik’s bed which was raised, now it was going down making Manik lay down comfortably. His eyes became heavy because of the effect of medicines. He smiled faintly looking at Shivansh who was covering him properly with the blanket. He closed his eyes and fell asleep within a few minutes.

“Nandini, you sleep here on the bed. I will sleep outside.” Shivansh asked her to sleep on the single bed which was in Manik’s room.

“Shivansh you sleep inside. He needs you. I will sleep outside.” Nandini said, looking at the sleeping Manik and then looked at him.

“Anyway I am not feeling sleepy so I will keep a check on him. You go and sleep. And now no arguments.” He spoke strictly and she nodded her head. She was standing there looking at him, he gestured her to go to the bed through his eyes. She gave him faint smile and walked toward the bed.

She stopped as Shivansh held her hand. She turned her face to look at him. He was gazing at her, having so much love in his eyes. She felt more guilty.

“Thank you for always being there for me, Nandini.” As he hispered, Nandini just gave him small smile. The guilt was killing her from inside. He left her hand. She immediately turned her face and shut her eyes tightly because of the guilt. Few tears rolled down her cheeks mechanically. She opened her eyes after composing herself and wiped off her tears with her palm.

She lay down on the bed and covered herself with the blanket. She closed her eyes and wondered how her life had changed so much. She had never thought before marrying to Shivansh that one day she would fall in love with his best friend. If she knew this before then she would have never agreed to marry Shivansh. It was her biggest mistake to say yes for marriage thinking that she would fall in love with him with the time.

From one year Shivansh had been giving her complete space in a hope that one day she would also love him. Nandini knew that Shivansh loved her a lot. But now she started feeling like she was making fun of his love and making him fool because the love which he was expecting from her that love he would never get from her. She couldn’t love him back because now she loved Manik. She wanted to tell this to Shivansh but didn’t know how. How she would explain the things to him? She didn’t want to hurt the person who had always loved her unconditionally. She couldn’t break his heart saying him directly that she would never able to love him back because she fell in love with somebody else and that somebody else was his best friend.

She got goosebumps all over her body thinking that how he would react knowing this. It would surely affect their pure friendship which she admired the most. She didn’t want to come in between them and didn’t want to break their friendship by telling the truth. She wasn’t understanding what she should do at this time. She was bemused. She didn’t want to break anybody’s heart but she wasn’t feeling good by acting in front of Shivansh that she loved him. She was tired of pretending that she was happy and madly in love with her husband.

She didn’t come to know when she fell asleep thinking about all this. On the other side, Shivansh was sitting outside bending forward and his hands were kept on his lap. He was twiddling his thumb thinking about Manik. He was thinking what he should do so that Manik would share his pain with him. The pain which was killing him from inside. He badly wanted to know. He couldn’t see him in pain and spoiling his life like this. He was his friend and he wanted to help him.

Nandini woke up after a few hours breathing heavily. She looked at Manik. She heard him murmuring something in sleep. She climbed down from the bed after removing her blanket. She wore her sleepers and walked toward him taking slow steps. She looked at his face. She felt sharp in her heart as she saw that he was crying in sleep. Lumps formed in her throat and her eyes brimmed up with the tears. She couldn’t see his pain. It was hurting her. His pain was making her weak.

She leaned down to hear what he was saying. She widened her eyes in shock as she heard him.

What do you think, what was Manik whispering in sleep?

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84 thoughts on “Love Or Sin (Part : 11 Guilt)

  1. I m worried for Manik because what ia gonna happen when shivansh will get to know the truth because the friendship they share is something so beautiful and pure I don’t want them part their ways 😭😭😭
    Though the story is completed but couldn’t stop myself from commenting this.
    I guess manik might have confessed 🙈♥️

  2. It was superb update.. Nicely described.. 👌 Don’t know what’s gonna to happen next but I m sure manik is confessing his love for her in sleep!!

  3. Amazingggggggg….. But jab shivansh ko pata chalega ki manik kya share nhi kar raha tab kya hoga.. Shivansh k liye bohot bura lag raha hain…manik nind main kya bol raha tha kahi nandini k bare ma tho nhi 😨😨

  4. First of all i would like to thanks you for sharing this “Amazing as well as Commendable” Story with us!😍

    Really I’m speechless ryt now!🤷‍♀

    I mean how you manage to portray every scene so Amazingly🤷‍♀

    Literally hats off to you for this Mehku!You know what? Each and every chapter of your story just took my heart away… 😍

    I always feel so connected to your stories that i can’t tell you in words.🙈

    Your each and every Story has made me believe in love all over again!😍 but your this story made me fall for the bond which Manik and Shivansh shares…❤

    OR should I say🤷‍♀👇

    Well I know I said this before too but what to do? I can’t help it yrr.. I really adore Manik and Shivansh friendship a lot.. And literally I’m too scared for them.. I don’t want them to break their friendship ever but I know when Shivansh got to known this.. The things will not remain same between them.. And that really hurts me.. My heart always started bleeding while thinking the consequences which may could occurs in future! 😔

    Well now come to the chapter so I would say I really enjoyed a lot.. 😍😍

    It’s treat to see cute cute Manik showing his tantrums 😍 goshhhh!!! 😍 he’s so cute mehku 😍 I really want to eat him! 🙈

    Well I enjoyed Shivansh and Manik’s cute saa scene a lot😍😍😍

    Literally that time that scene look like a pure bliss! 😍😍😍😍

    Now come to nandu.. So I’ll say.. I really feel very bad for her.. It’s not her mistake yrr that she loves Manik..

    I mean C’mon love is love yrr.. It can happen any moment with that person who is really your soul mate who was gifted by God!❤

    who is made for you and only you! 😍

    I know she’s married but she can’t cheat Shivansh ryt by not telling him the truth… Coz according to me falling for he’s best friend is not SIN but not telling him the truth is the BIGGEST SIN.

    Coz I think he deserve to know all these things!❤

    Well at last I would say that “This story is so painful… Literally my heart is hurting so much for all three of them.. They all are so good mehku.. I’m so confused ryt now that what to say for them.. I literally love MaNan.. And I do want to see them together but at the same time I couldn’t able to neglect Shivansh.. He’s too good mehku.. He really loves nandu a lot.. 😓

    I’m crying ryt now.. 😭 but yeah one thing is for sure that the love you portray from the Shivansh side is also a pure bliss😍



    Well I’m so excited to read further coz literally I’m feeling so much connected to your STORY🌹

    Well again I’ll say that I’ll pray that your every wish comes true!❤

    May you will get lots of love, success, appreciation in your life.❤

    And yeah I’ll be always there for you!❤

    With lots of love..❤
    _your biggest fan~

    PS~ I miss my inline comments and that “101 wala dialogue!”😔


    1. Wow I am just speechless reading your comment baby. It was worth waiting yaar. I am in love with you comment *giggling* I am so happy you guyz are liking this story and feeling connected to this.

      I know baby you will always support me don’t need to say this.

      Ab new dialogue 1001 words ka comment karungi 😂😂😂

      1. No no… New dialogue hai 2555+ words comment 🙈🙈🙈 joh Maine kiya 💃💃💃💃 itna maza aaya… 🙈🙈🙈🙈 I love to write long long long Long… Super duper long comments for you!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

  5. Ohh my God mehku the update was so heart wrenching..
    I was feeling like that I would be in tears any moment..
    You are explaining the trio’s pain so well..
    Manik’s pain and dilemma .. On onw side he loved nandini so much that ge can’t control himself but on the other side shivaansh is his best friend and he would never ever betray his friend.. He is in so much pain and you explained it beautifully 😭
    And Nandini on one side even she has realised her love for Manik she wants to heal him she wants him to be happy but she can’t be close to him because she is married she even feels guilty to feel this way for manik which she never felt for shivansh.. nandini is truely a pure soul.. her pain just makes me cry..
    And talking about shivansh without any fault of him he will suffer .. shivansh is so caring and loving whether it’s for manik or nandini.. he is a perfect husband and he loves nandini but he will way much hurted when he’ll know the truth… shivansh loves manik so much that he can leave nandini for him but when he’ll come to know that they love each other he will be so hurt..
    This story is very unique no one is villain here but yes it’s all about timing.. if manik and nandini would have met earlier things would have been sorted but its all about fate.. whatever has to happen it will happen no one can stop that..
    I just hope their sufferings ends soon.. waiting for next updated eagerly.. ❤
    And you’re writing very beautifullly.. ❤

  6. no words ur writing so so beautifully you explained every scene .and everyone feeling man
    made me speechless
    i don’t know what to write
    i can’t describe in words always how much i love your writing
    u explained manan and shivansh feeling so feel
    i feel their pain
    all r in so much pain 😢😢💔
    manik and shivansh me se ek na ek ka dil toh toote ga ek din 😭😭😭 coz nandu toh ek ki ho skti
    bachra shivansh itna pyaar karta nandu se itna acha hai yaar vo
    he deserve true love in his life yaar😭😭n uska pyaar kabhi uska nhi ho skta that’s made me emotional😭😭😭
    n manik se vo kitna pyaar karta hai
    ek dam bhai ki tara
    he is best husband n friend
    but phir bhi vo dhukhe me hai 😭😭
    use jab pata chalega ki jo log uski life me sabse important vahi uska dil tootege shit i m so scared of their future

    .manan vo bhi kya kar skte pyaar ho gaya unko pyaar ko koi ruk thodi na skta hai ,😭😭😭
    n that medi scene is superbly written yaar
    shivansh kaise manik no medi khila rha hota i love their cute bond yaar
    muje bahut cute laga n nandu ki laugh me dono lost ho gye …
    that scene mad me emotional 😭😭coz nandu toh ek ki ho skti hai ek na ek ka dil tootega hi end me😭😭😭😭😭😭
    manik ne jaldi se medi kha ki nandu ke liye
    n wrote this scene beautiful
    explained it so well…na …
    nailed it 👌👍👍👍👍
    dono ek dusre se itna pyaar karte hai poor manan show nhi kar skte bol nhi skte they r so helpless
    n i can feel their pain coz u explained their pain so well yaar
    hats of to your writing
    n shivansh yaar he love her so much yaar….😭😭😭
    nandu ko bhi bahut guilt hota hai
    but she can’t tell me 😭😭😭the truth easily
    u explained her guilt situation so well yaar ….
    ek dam mast
    n shivansh apne frnd ki problem ke bare me soch raha kitna acha yaar vo manik ke bare me kitna sochta hai 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭vo
    n manik bta bhi nhi skta apna pain apne friend ko yaar

    so helpless situation ….in their lifes

    exicted for the next part yaar ..this part is out of the word feel aa gyi teri osm n beautiful writing se…😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

  7. You know what nandu I think tumhe shivanash ko bata dena chahiye not beacause you are in love with manik and want to become be with him but you don’t want to hurt shivanash he was such a nice person I don’t think uski hope last main tute

      1. Yaar dream hain kuch bhi ho sakta hain kyunki Jo ham real main nahi bol pate woh ham dreams main bolte hain yaa phir bachpan ki koi baat Jo maybe usne shivanash ko na batayi ho

      2. I will beacause mujhe bhi bilkul Pasand nahi koi mujhe story end pehle hi bata de I was way happy to in suspense in last

  8. Did Manik confess his love ?
    It’s a twirl of emotions for everyone and situation they are put in are wrong

  9. I like the cute manik 😂🤣🤣😂 he is so so so cute I wish I could marry him😍😍😍😍 but this update so cute and awesome I loved day by day your proving me that u can be world best writer 😊😊😊😊

  10. Cute Manik is always a treat to watch😍😍😍drama queen😂i love the bond the frndship of shivansh nd Manik❤️
    I thought shivansh will be shocked to see him taking medicine instantly after nandini asked him to but i guess he was taking it so normally😅but feeling bad for manan as they can’t share their feelings to each other or anyone else nd other side they can’t live without each other🤨nd i hope Nandini will be able to tell everything to shivansh as the more she would wait the more he will be hurt😕 nd i guess Manik was murmuring about something related to his feelings for Nandini or maybe the guilt of betraying his best friend..

  11. Great Chapter once again 😍
    Now it feels like the story is taking a new turn..I would like a further glimpse into Manan’s life..

    The way you describe their ignorance, love, care, emotions n all just Speechless.. Nd specilly manik thought ki nandini touch n kiss se he feel better ek second ko laga manik khud bol rha nandini se but ye thought tha.. 🤭

    Nd nandini n manik ye ignoring game kab tak chalega.. Dono ek dusre ki feeling ke bare me jaante hai but phr bhi helpless hai.. But bolte hai na “Aankhe bhi hoti hai Dil ki Zubaan”.. Manik knows nandini very well ❤❤

    Manik n nandini toh aise pretend kar rhe hai jaise ek dusre ko jante nai hai.. Nandini bhi kya kar skti vo bhi helpless n manik bhi helpless..Rok lo manik nandini ko khud se dur jaane se 🙈

    Nandini needs to develop a little more spine if she intends to survive the tumultuous waters of love.. Nandini manik ke siva kuch soch bhi nai paa rhi hai.. Manik n nandini ek dusre ke bare me hi soch rhe hai.. manik soch rha nandini ko kaise rok lu 🤭
    If I was a filmmaker i would have asked u to make a film Or show on your story.. That would be A outstanding show with real passion, love, Trust, True Friendship, Betrayal n Amazing characters n Storyline 😍🙈❤

    We may assume nice things, but w’ll never know what u intend to do..From what we have read nd seen, Nandini is really fall in love wid manik n yha se back out ka koi bhi way nai hai.. Naa manik hi back kar skta hai apni feeling se naa hi nandini..
    I’m laughing ki cabir mukti koi bhi decide nai kar paa rha tha ki kisko rukna hai.. I knew it nandini toh jayegi nai.. But lastly cabir ne shivansh se bola ki your stubborn wife nandini ko pasand nai aaya clear hai..

    Shivansh character mai chah kar bhi nafrat nai kar skti.. Yaa nandini shivansh ke sth khush rehti jb manik unki life me nai aata.. But destiny ne kuch or hi socha hai inke liye..
    Nd manik n shivansh true friends n manik shows Tantrums n he was handling manik like manik shivansh ka father n this scene was so much beautiful n Cutest.. Health ko lekar shivansh bhut strict hai n i liked it.. Nd the way nandini said “Good keep it up Mr Mother Oberoi” Really funny 😂
    All thanks to u for writing them so amazingly 😍

    Manik n nandini ki life totally messed up hai n manik jante hue nandini ki feeling pretend kar rha ki nandini ko prblm na face karna pade.. It’s very difficult to pretend hm kuch nai jaante n hme pta sab hota hai..

    Nd other side poor nandini n her poor condition I know nandini thk nai hai feeling guilty n betrayed shivansh ke liye positive hai.. 😑

    Nandini manik se true love karne lagi hai na vo usse dur jaana chahti hai na paas aana chahti hai it’s so messed up man.. But jb nandini ne manik ko medicine khilayi toh manik ne chupchap kha li no tantrum wahh manik..
    But nandini I’m wid u tm soch rhi tm shivansh se betray kar rhi n ye guilt but ek baat bta du tm or shivansh one year se sth the but love nai hua n manik’s entry n all isme tm wrong nai ho..
    Pyr kbhi bhi ho skta hai n ho skta hai shivansh ko bhi kisi se pyar ho jaye 😂😂

    Oh oh!! What a bumpy roadroad our Manan has to face.. On one side his bestest friend n like brother.. On the other hand is his beloved nandini.. Manik n nandini dono helpless apni feeling ko jaankar bhi kuch nai kar skte.. N nandini itni easily shivansh ko kuch nai bta payegi..

    It was superb as always n Amazing update..

    Can’t wait to know what happens next.. I’m in love wid the way of your writing.. Awedd 😍😍😍

    Thank u n Muaahhh for this 💋

    Lots n lots of love…
    Gudiya 😍😘

    1. Omg.. itna long comment.. i am just so happy to read your comment meri gudiya. Your are best in this whole world. You always know how to make me smile 😊 . Love you a lot meri gudiya. And yah get well soon. Take care

      1. This is best reply meri sweetu.. I love u alot ❤❤❤

  12. Manik shivansh bond was really very cute how much they care about each other when will truth comes out what will happen I am curious and kid manik was really very

  13. Amazing yaar…… Waiting for the upcoming chapters…… Loving your plot so much😍

      1. Yeah emotional i know. I mean not to bring them closer now only both are in sad state so bring a lapse moment where they forget their real identity and for few moment get solace smthng like that

  14. Amazing 😍
    This story is ❤
    U r an amazing writer
    Thanks for this update
    Awaiting for further 🤗🤗

  15. Honestly I don’t know what to write because I am speechless
    The chapters are getting beautiful and emotional as the same time

    The way u portray their emotions is just phenomenal and magical
    No matter how much I write about it … won’t do any justice because no words can describe how beautifully u write

    U write so magically that the person can easily lost themself in the chapter
    U makes us feel what they are going through
    Ur writing makes us feel that…

    If they are happy we will me happy and jumping
    If they’re in pain and crying….we will also cry like an idiot And then we think why am I crying 😅

    U always show every person’s character and relation with manik beautifully …ur writing really makes feel that how much that person means to manik and vice versa
    U always give importance to each and every character and that’s really really beautiful because not every writer do

    The way u r showing shivansh character sometimes makes me feel like no nandu dont love manik 😅
    I am die hard fan of manan but sometimes I want nandu to be with shivansh because that guy is such a good and pure soul
    That I feel so bad for him that I cant Express it

    The way he was handling Manik’s tantrums was so cute and adorable
    He was really behaving like a strict mother

    Nandu and manik situation is so messed up
    Its getting so difficult for them to hide the pain and guilt

    One side they have to handle the pain and suffering of not being with each other and other side they are feeling gulity for betraying shivansh like that

    Na sath rh skte hai aur na hi durr ja skte hai
    It’s so fucked up that it makes me so sad and upset for them

    He hates the medicine but just to not create more problems for her usne chup chap kha li
    I dont why it just made me so emotional

    And I think he was maybe confessing her feeling or saying something related to nandu

    Lots of love

    1. Your comment is love simo like always. It really encourage me ❤️❤️❤️. Thank you so much. Love you a lot❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰

  16. Full of shades friendship,love,cute ness,right to claim,pain &urge to be with each other besides that guilt buy love is blessing if it’s create situation to trouble you then it only helps you to see the way from get out of it awesome writing tytytytttttgyyyyyyyyssssssssssmmmmmmm @mehaklovely waiting for the next part eagerly ❤❤❤❤

  17. Amazing update👌🏻

    I could imagine how manik will look
    when he throw tantrums he will be the cutest kid .

    About shivash and manik friendship was a pure bond .and shivansh was a good husband also.he give space to nandini.and i think manik and nandini are doing wrong with him by not sharing their feelings.i know it will be hard for him.but loveing someone else and living with him to not hurt him is wrong .and shivash so concerned about maniks pain so manik also doing frnd wrong by hiding something.

    As always wouldnt predict anything what will happend next or how they will get will shivash get to many questions but we know our lovely writer will have a better plans and answer for all questions .so eagerly waiting .

    Great work sis .all the best.lots of love.take care

  18. Amazing update❣️
    Cute manik is scene to watch😍😍

    Its so difficult to find such a true friend cum family like shivansh in this fake world😍😍
    Beautiful bond between manik and shivansh
    How both manik and nandu trying to hide their feelings but still the inner turmoil can’t be hidden form your loved ones😍😍😍


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